SOP has a different format!! Help!!

So generally, Write Ivy and others have suggested using the standard - Intro, about the program (faculty/course) and then experiences followed by conclusion. But this format seems weird to me. I find it easier to talk about my experiences and then mention why their college is the right fit for me . My current format has - intro - experiences (2.5 paras) and realization of why i need a masters at all through these. Then about their uni/course/faculties i want to work with (2 paras) and then a conclusion. This format was kinda trashed on by jordan on one of his blogs so now im reconsidering quite a lot! Anyone got into some good unis with the format I'm using?? Please do share !